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Overview
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This proposal describes an authenticated key agreement protocol to improve the
This specification defines an authenticated key agreement protocol to improve the
resistance of [SSU]_ to various forms of automated identification and attacks.
The proposal is organized as follows: the security goals are presented,
followed by a discussion of the basic protocol. Next, a complete specification
of all protocol messages is given. Finally, router addresses and version
identification are discussed.
As with other I2P transports, SSU2 is defined
for point-to-point (router-to-router) transport of I2NP messages.
It is not a general-purpose data pipe.
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Noise Protocol Framework
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This proposal provides the requirements based on the Noise Protocol Framework
This specification provides the requirements based on the Noise Protocol Framework
[NOISE]_ (Revision 33, 2017-10-04).
Noise has similar properties to the Station-To-Station protocol
[STS]_, which is the basis for the [SSU]_ protocol. In Noise parlance, Alice
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Additions to the Framework
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This proposal defines the following enhancements to
This specification defines the following enhancements to
Noise_XK_25519_ChaChaPoly_SHA256. These generally follow the guidelines in
[NOISE]_ section 13.
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Congestion Control
====================
This proposal specifies the protocol for packet numbering and
This specification specifies the protocol for packet numbering and
ACK blocks. This provides sufficient real-time information for a
transmitter to implement an efficient and responsive congestion control algorithm,
while allowing flexibility and innovation in that implementation.